tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post1822561755472487955..comments2023-06-12T05:42:33.003-07:00Comments on Mrs. Dennert's Blog: Something I TreasureWriting Teacher78http://www.blogger.com/profile/00862586497331858541noreply@blogger.comBlogger64125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post-54372066465338687592016-05-31T06:44:40.483-07:002016-05-31T06:44:40.483-07:00I enjoyed your speech because the topic was relata...I enjoyed your speech because the topic was relatable to experiences I've had. Your presentation seemed confident and well practiced and I was thoroughly impressed with how you did. The painting was beautiful and it was a pleasure to be able to hear your speech in person.Joseph Behrshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07651090568127046664noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post-68201526537286303982016-05-31T06:41:36.523-07:002016-05-31T06:41:36.523-07:00Henry, I really enjoyed your speech. You did a goo...Henry, I really enjoyed your speech. You did a good job of using humor and connecting it into a topic that you care about. It was also interesting to see things from a different perspective when it comes to growing facial hair. You put meaning behind a topic that many might consider casual or meaningless and that is worth attention.Joseph Behrshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07651090568127046664noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post-59920662869876504432016-05-31T06:39:11.127-07:002016-05-31T06:39:11.127-07:00Your speech was very interesting. At first, I coul...Your speech was very interesting. At first, I couldn't pick the important object off of your keychain, and once I did find the correct one, I was stumped as to why it was so important to you. This was a very interesting way to keep me thinking throughout your speech, but it made me pay a bit less attention to your speaking. It was a very interesting idea and I think it played out correctly overall. Good speech.Joseph Behrshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07651090568127046664noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post-44798607758287082262016-05-31T06:35:58.757-07:002016-05-31T06:35:58.757-07:00Pablo I really enjoyed your speech about your pill...Pablo I really enjoyed your speech about your pillow. It was very interesting to hear you relate different experiences and stories you have had with it and the sentimental importance that such a simple object can have. Your delivery was solid and your accent did not take away from your speech. I think you did a good job and you should be proud of your performance.Joseph Behrshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07651090568127046664noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post-27274556573223775432016-05-31T06:32:55.451-07:002016-05-31T06:32:55.451-07:00I really enjoyed giving this speech. I felt prepar...I really enjoyed giving this speech. I felt prepared and comfortable, plus it was easy to talk about a topic I felt very close to at the time. My presentation wasn't the best, I feel as though I could have stood a little taller and spoken more clearly, but in the moment everything felt well executed. It meant a lot to talk about this topic and I hope I did it justice.Joseph Behrshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07651090568127046664noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post-51232957843643672852016-04-25T05:20:26.000-07:002016-04-25T05:20:26.000-07:00Grace! Your speech was really enjoyable to listen ...Grace! Your speech was really enjoyable to listen to. I have always wanted to go on a mission trip and now you have inspired me to want to go even more. I was evident you spent a lot of time writing, editing, and practicing for this speech. It was really neat to see how God changed your life over the course of a week! Even though this speech was manuscript you rarely looked down at your paper and made really good eye contact the entire time. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post-85832746906303940252016-04-25T05:11:55.968-07:002016-04-25T05:11:55.968-07:00Cassie! I think this is one of your best speeches ...Cassie! I think this is one of your best speeches yet. You incorporated really great visual aids that caught our attention. It was neat hearing your personal experience at LAB! You also did a great job adding humor in at appropriate times! The only thing you can improve is a steady speaking rate. Overall, your speech was really enjoyable! Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post-63638353143583736662016-04-20T07:23:09.767-07:002016-04-20T07:23:09.767-07:00Jamie, overall this speech was well written and we...Jamie, overall this speech was well written and well spoken. I think you did an okay job at the eye contact with the audience but it was not bad. Other than that your speech was perfect. It was fun to listen to and it made me really want to go and experience that trip. Overall it was a job well done!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post-86853484892512965932016-04-20T07:21:05.779-07:002016-04-20T07:21:05.779-07:00Grace, this speech was really touching and it real...Grace, this speech was really touching and it really gave me goosebumps. To see how a trip like that changes you and your faith is really powerful. Its funny how God does things sometimes but I am glad that this trip really brought you closer in the faith with him. I do hope that you get to go back there and experience all that again. Overall with the speech I think you did a great job with eye contact, knowing your speech, and the flow of your speech. Great pauses and just a great speech overall!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post-64919363496897209322016-04-20T07:16:12.142-07:002016-04-20T07:16:12.142-07:00Henry, your speech was one of my favorites. You di...Henry, your speech was one of my favorites. You did a great job with the slide show to and tying it into your speech. I am not lying when I say you had the audience at the edge of their seats waiting for that next slide! You did a great job and you are really talented at public speaking for the quiet guy that you are. Keep up the good work!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post-40518169002478405052016-04-20T07:13:51.648-07:002016-04-20T07:13:51.648-07:00Kevin, overall it was a great speech and I enjoyed...Kevin, overall it was a great speech and I enjoyed listening to it. I do agree though that the eye contact and pauses need to be a little more improved but it is easy to tell that you have been improving with every speech you have done. You have become a better speaker to me with every speech and you are doing a great job. Keep up the good work!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post-48339304177108522872016-04-20T07:09:59.020-07:002016-04-20T07:09:59.020-07:00Overall I think this speech went pretty well. Ther...Overall I think this speech went pretty well. There was a lack of eye contact a little when I started to hit the emotional part of the speech but I feel like I got my point across and kept my pace slow, loud and clear. It was a little different talking about something that was actually close to me and meant a lot to me but I feel like myself and the audience handled it great. Still things to improve on and touch up and I plan to take all the advice given to me into the next speech! Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post-40185064768711479192016-04-17T19:59:13.440-07:002016-04-17T19:59:13.440-07:00Pablo, Its crazy to think how random objects can ...Pablo, Its crazy to think how random objects can affect your life so much. I liked the pillow idea. It made me wonder what me and my pillow have gone through. Overall I really liked your speech and I can't wait for your next oneAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04706289793242319298noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post-23783857612380408672016-04-17T19:55:49.786-07:002016-04-17T19:55:49.786-07:00Kevin, when you were reading the speech out to me ...Kevin, when you were reading the speech out to me in the beginning. I wasn't sure where you were going with what you treasure. Looking at it now I liked the fact of how you got hear and you calling yourself a sailor. Overall I enjoyed it and am looking forward for your next speechAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04706289793242319298noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post-31735065193499244772016-04-15T09:15:06.412-07:002016-04-15T09:15:06.412-07:00Grace, was a really good speech. I've always ...Grace, was a really good speech. I've always wanted to go on a mission trip. I could tell you were passionate and it added to your speech. I could not tell at all that you were nervous. Your eye contact was also really good. Your picture was really cool. I cannot wait for your next speech. nice job!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12412958060678976089noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post-22840672817320857912016-04-15T09:11:22.622-07:002016-04-15T09:11:22.622-07:00Pablo, I really liked your speech. I never though...Pablo, I really liked your speech. I never thought about how much I actually treasure my pillow. I think your eye contact was really good considering we had a manuscript speech. You also looked very confident and comfortable. Pablo your speech was very good and I cannot wait for your next one.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12412958060678976089noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post-63199665058575153932016-04-15T09:08:39.188-07:002016-04-15T09:08:39.188-07:00Zack I really enjoyed your speech. It was very go...Zack I really enjoyed your speech. It was very good. I could tell tell that you were really passionate and it made the speech even better. I never really thought about what people have on there key chains can tell you about that person. I did not notice at all that you went over your time. My attention was kept during the whole speech. I think your eye contact was not as good as on your other speeches but it was still pretty good. I like how you pray before your speeches and I think I might start doing that. Overall, really nice job!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12412958060678976089noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post-4204811588326714982016-04-15T09:04:01.345-07:002016-04-15T09:04:01.345-07:00Henry, I loved your speech. It was probably my fa...Henry, I loved your speech. It was probably my favorite speech. As the speech went on I think you got more and more confidence which really helped your speech. I think your eye contact was also very good. The pictures were a really good addition to it. I aspire to have a beard like you. Nice job! Cannot wait for your next speech.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12412958060678976089noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post-57423695334906329662016-04-15T07:21:34.812-07:002016-04-15T07:21:34.812-07:00This speech was so easy. I'm glad I was able t...This speech was so easy. I'm glad I was able to think of something to talk about right away. The toughest part for me was trying to think of stories or things that happened before I got my necklace as well as after. I was happy with my final product. I approached with confidence and felt less nervous right away. This is one of my favorite speeches this year! Overall I think I did very well. I spoke slowly and clearly and gave more expression. Kristenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01701816140613217013noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post-15848385583724797362016-04-14T20:57:45.427-07:002016-04-14T20:57:45.427-07:00Zack I really loved your speech. I could tell that...Zack I really loved your speech. I could tell that you really enjoyed your topic. Overall I think you did a very nice job, but sometimes I felt like you talked a little fast as the result of being so passionate. I agree on the eye contact. I never get bored during your speeches! Keep up the great work! Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post-33776422982345364942016-04-14T20:52:33.899-07:002016-04-14T20:52:33.899-07:00Grace you did a really nice job! I could tell that...Grace you did a really nice job! I could tell that this was something that you were very passionate about and that really came through in your speech. I think you did a nice job with eye contact which is something that is hard to do with a manuscript . It was so cool tip hear you talk about your faith! Each of your speeches keep getting better and better! Keep up the good work! Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post-42893288740854126832016-04-14T20:47:52.851-07:002016-04-14T20:47:52.851-07:00Jamie, I really enjoyed your speech. It made me re...Jamie, I really enjoyed your speech. It made me really want to go on a Disney cruise to the Caribbean. I could tell that you really loved your friends and that special time you had with them. I think overall your speech was very well done, though I do agree that your eye contact suffered a little. You did a great job and I can't wait to hear your next speech.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post-35907876507944715632016-04-14T20:16:39.413-07:002016-04-14T20:16:39.413-07:00Vicky, I liked this speech of yours. Your story wa...Vicky, I liked this speech of yours. Your story was really interesting. After your speech, I wanted to travel to Jordan myself. I think you should add more detail in your story, focus on one story. Your voice was a little low. But other than those, it was a great speech! Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15366440149936080640noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post-53168319530680290692016-04-14T20:16:11.492-07:002016-04-14T20:16:11.492-07:00Henry, I really liked your speech. Your topic was ...Henry, I really liked your speech. Your topic was so interesting! I didn’t even know someone treasure their beard that much. The use of PPT was really helpful for your speech topic, it made the speech more lively and visual. Good job!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15366440149936080640noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post-44037029826937030432016-04-14T20:05:02.082-07:002016-04-14T20:05:02.082-07:00I think I did pretty good on this speech. For me, ...I think I did pretty good on this speech. For me, this is my favorite speech so far. I spent a lot of time on the manuscript and try to make it as good as possible, and the final manuscript went really well. During the speech, I made a couple pronunciation mistake. Most of them are big long words which I’m not familiar with. I think next time I should avoid using those words. My rate is a little slow and my tone is not really lively. But the use of manuscript really made this speech easier for me to prepare. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15366440149936080640noreply@blogger.com