tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post3335495105269586010..comments2023-06-12T05:42:33.003-07:00Comments on Mrs. Dennert's Blog: Informative SpeechWriting Teacher78http://www.blogger.com/profile/00862586497331858541noreply@blogger.comBlogger54125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post-785965060997940152014-12-19T07:23:16.936-08:002014-12-19T07:23:16.936-08:00I enjoyed this speech very much. It was a speech w...I enjoyed this speech very much. It was a speech where I could express the thing I liked most. It was fairly easy in my opinion and I think my eye contact and gestures were done pretty well. What I might have done differently is getting more information on some topics I talked about because I felt that some people still didn't understand what I was talking about. <br /><br />Seth: I enjoyed your speech very much. You always come up to the podium and deliver a good speech<br /><br />Anton: I believe you have more potential than you think. All you need is more practice of self confidence and I think you will be an excellent speaker one day.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post-63600391975850564012014-12-06T09:40:12.036-08:002014-12-06T09:40:12.036-08:00I enjoyed listening to your speech. I never knew h...I enjoyed listening to your speech. I never knew how much tradition is apart of that still. You seemed confident about your topic and sounded pretty good.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post-75832402677839295752014-12-06T09:36:50.848-08:002014-12-06T09:36:50.848-08:00I learned a lot about this speech. I did shot put ...I learned a lot about this speech. I did shot put in grade school but never really understood it. I thought this topic was a perfect match for you and sounded well down and professional. Great job!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post-11768759219887439512014-12-06T09:31:14.946-08:002014-12-06T09:31:14.946-08:00I didn't like how my speech went this time. I ...I didn't like how my speech went this time. I changed my intro a lot the night before and added in those videos too. I could have practiced the new intro more and maybe left out a video, even though I liked those video from that series. I knew the information that I wanted to present but after stumbling on my intro it kinda went down hill from there. I skipped over some important info which I think made other sections confusing and not make sense.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post-21467764417094454822014-12-01T19:04:55.316-08:002014-12-01T19:04:55.316-08:00I'm extremely disappointed in myself yet again...I'm extremely disappointed in myself yet again. I wasn't prepared and I completed it about 3 days before actually presenting it. I should have compiled a works cited page and I forgot all about the conclusion. I think that I was definitely more confident, however, so that's a decent improvement.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03350253561178106919noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post-67671691305145720142014-12-01T17:59:28.608-08:002014-12-01T17:59:28.608-08:00thank you so much for this speech! it always bothe...thank you so much for this speech! it always bothered me how people believed the myths portrayed in these shows. You seemed very knowledgeable and passionate about it and you maintained good eye contact Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03350253561178106919noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post-8479993740631908172014-12-01T17:39:32.906-08:002014-12-01T17:39:32.906-08:00Don't worry about it too much- I think you did...Don't worry about it too much- I think you did pretty well. I always admire it when people are passionate about their beliefs and can adequately back them up. However, I do believe you could have spoken a little bit more- the video composed a big chunk of your speech.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03350253561178106919noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post-974053860353887712014-12-01T17:36:18.824-08:002014-12-01T17:36:18.824-08:00I think you did an excellent job. It was an extrem...I think you did an excellent job. It was an extremely fascinating topic and I can tell it's something you're definitely well-informed about. You maintained some good composure and eye contact as well.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03350253561178106919noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post-68499730506405211032014-12-01T11:24:28.598-08:002014-12-01T11:24:28.598-08:00Being a disc golfer I thought you did really well ...Being a disc golfer I thought you did really well with all the info. Although I did know pretty much all of it, I felt that what you said was spot on. Good job!!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14554190726670398859noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post-84362760281291404042014-12-01T11:21:24.960-08:002014-12-01T11:21:24.960-08:00I thought you did really well your speech. You see...I thought you did really well your speech. You seemed like you knew a lot about it! Good job!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14554190726670398859noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post-32126395356048751442014-12-01T11:20:26.270-08:002014-12-01T11:20:26.270-08:00Ok this speech I felt went very well. From all the...Ok this speech I felt went very well. From all the research I did I felt like I knew a lot about this, and being a football player I had a pretty good knowledge for it already. I feel like using an outline is best for me but I also feel like it is hard to have an outline and have good eye contact. Overall I really enjoyed this speech and it might have been my favorite one.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14554190726670398859noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post-57431592743359574342014-12-01T01:00:26.437-08:002014-12-01T01:00:26.437-08:00I really enjoyed your speech, and I really enjoyed...I really enjoyed your speech, and I really enjoyed your topic. You really appeared as though you had prepared a lot for this speech. I also really liked your choice of words. I also thought you had a lot of eye contact. Overall, very well done indeed.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03378892340258001969noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post-30378722897765530842014-12-01T00:58:22.461-08:002014-12-01T00:58:22.461-08:00I really enjoyed your speech, especially sense I c...I really enjoyed your speech, especially sense I could relate to the crime shows (because I watch them like all the time). I also thought you were very professional when you spoke, and you appeared to know exactly what you were talking about. In addition I thought you had wonderful eye contact and along with your professionalism you added character to it, which made very enjoyable to watch.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03378892340258001969noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post-47568043160233065932014-11-29T22:32:59.716-08:002014-11-29T22:32:59.716-08:00Hey Nick, your speeches seem to improve every sing...Hey Nick, your speeches seem to improve every single time. I thought that your info was interesting, especially with nintendo being my favorite gaming system. I thought though that you could have maybe cut out some of the info cuz I think the speech was a little long, but in the end I'd rather have a longer speech than a shorter speech! Also, your eye contact and flow seem to be getting better as well. noiceeee. Oh yeah and Max Hoffman is a joke.^^^^^Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03407755820880656566noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post-56487939888979427122014-11-29T22:28:07.983-08:002014-11-29T22:28:07.983-08:00Winter Fresh this was one of my favs for your spee...Winter Fresh this was one of my favs for your speeches. I think you presented the info in a logical way where even someone who never has played frolfing before would be able to understand the information. For some reason I agree that the manuscript is a nice way to go. Your eye contact and tone were on point, and your speech went smoothly. Like what you're doin, right idea.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03407755820880656566noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post-54991134833896003752014-11-27T20:49:53.042-08:002014-11-27T20:49:53.042-08:00I am also a fan of K-pop, I once was really into s...I am also a fan of K-pop, I once was really into surper junior, I think you includes a lot in your speech, and I really liked to listen to your speech. However, for the video that you showed, I think you should make it shorter.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post-73371298880736954132014-11-27T20:44:51.263-08:002014-11-27T20:44:51.263-08:00This speech went ok for me, I was so nervous about...This speech went ok for me, I was so nervous about the speech before. When I practice my speech, it is just about 8 minutes, I was worried about the timing during my speech. My eye contact is better than last one, I tried to look all around the room. My introduction is good I think, And I think my conclusion is ok for everyone to know it is the end of the speech. I really spent a lot time to make my power point, and I think it is not bad for me. And I really recommend everyone to watch Korean drama.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post-26423243271059953142014-11-27T04:33:43.428-08:002014-11-27T04:33:43.428-08:00I thoroughly enjoyed your speech. The information ...I thoroughly enjoyed your speech. The information was not only interesting, but you threw in the funny stories and kept it upbeat. Great job!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post-25754831632773010122014-11-27T04:30:32.664-08:002014-11-27T04:30:32.664-08:00I thought that your speech went very well. You see...I thought that your speech went very well. You seemed prepared, calm, and interested in what you talked about. You did a great job!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post-38229749241740568862014-11-27T04:27:19.094-08:002014-11-27T04:27:19.094-08:00This speech was very shaky for me. I wasn't co...This speech was very shaky for me. I wasn't comfortable with it from the start, and by the time I was in front of the class to speak, I was not feeling right either. My topic was a bit unusual to try and narrow and made it sound awkward and vague. My intro and conclusion were very poor and my visuals seemed a bit simple. Overall, this was my least favorite speech.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post-22822402626155118362014-11-26T18:22:49.008-08:002014-11-26T18:22:49.008-08:00I liked your speech a lot. It was very informativ...I liked your speech a lot. It was very informative and I learned a lot. I could tell you were passionate about your topic. You seemed very well organized and did a great job over-all.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post-22720823912532344482014-11-26T18:19:50.095-08:002014-11-26T18:19:50.095-08:00This was one of my favorite speeches. I was prett...This was one of my favorite speeches. I was pretty nervous to present and it really showed in the first minute of my speech. I started out stuttering on almost every other word which didn't make me feel very confident. After I powered through the nerves I started to really get into my speech. I felt pretty strongly about my topic and really enjoyed presenting it. The freedom of having note cards instead of a manuscript helped having better eye contact. Over-all I think after the introduction it turned out to be a pretty solid speech.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post-9091864999494500372014-11-26T18:12:08.662-08:002014-11-26T18:12:08.662-08:00I also was delighted to be involved in your speech...I also was delighted to be involved in your speech. I really learned a lot about allusions and the like. You are one of the main speakers in our class that I can't wait to hear. Keep up the good work.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post-15561470687519859702014-11-26T12:04:40.323-08:002014-11-26T12:04:40.323-08:00Ty: http://youtu.be/Ey40RUz9UxM
Seth: http://youtu...Ty: http://youtu.be/Ey40RUz9UxM<br />Seth: http://youtu.be/-jxP0AJuS3AWriting Teacher78https://www.blogger.com/profile/00862586497331858541noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post-65713603007853382592014-11-26T11:44:06.904-08:002014-11-26T11:44:06.904-08:00Chris I really liked your speech. All of your spee...Chris I really liked your speech. All of your speeches have been interesting and informative, but this took interesting to a new level with your examples of illusions involving the audience.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com