tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post5149470863576727954..comments2023-06-12T05:42:33.003-07:00Comments on Mrs. Dennert's Blog: Persuasive/Convincing SpeechWriting Teacher78http://www.blogger.com/profile/00862586497331858541noreply@blogger.comBlogger99125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post-3537946657834417972015-01-12T01:42:59.178-08:002015-01-12T01:42:59.178-08:00I agree with your idea that brush teeth is importa...I agree with your idea that brush teeth is important. Dentists give us a lot of suggestions.everyone of us should learn how to protect our teeth.Your eye contact is good. And your speech is organized . Well done!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post-8437731492529794502015-01-12T01:40:31.829-08:002015-01-12T01:40:31.829-08:00I agree with you that the real book is much better...I agree with you that the real book is much better than e book. Your examples and reasons are concise. Your eye contact and speaking speed are good. I like your speech. Well done!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post-20438700421534444372015-01-12T01:37:33.973-08:002015-01-12T01:37:33.973-08:00Your topic is interesting. But as you said, you lo...Your topic is interesting. But as you said, you looks do not like that speech and feels uncomfortable in front of the camera. If you can improve your facial expression, it would be better. Well done!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post-68996269937000196462015-01-12T01:32:13.588-08:002015-01-12T01:32:13.588-08:00It is obvious that you did a lot of research for t...It is obvious that you did a lot of research for the speech. A lot of examples and statistics data make your speech more persuasive. Your speech is strong and convincing. I agree with your idea too. Well done !Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post-92021273791066444822015-01-12T01:28:27.672-08:002015-01-12T01:28:27.672-08:00Your topic is attractive. It is obvious that you a...Your topic is attractive. It is obvious that you are well prepared for the speech because it is organized. If you improve your facial expression, it would be better. Above all, well done!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post-77983304035094762982015-01-12T01:23:15.832-08:002015-01-12T01:23:15.832-08:00I am agree with your idea. Social media drives us ...I am agree with your idea. Social media drives us to keep look at phones which would distract us from study. Technology does really affect people's life. Your ideas and examples are concise. Your eye contact is good. Well done!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post-45148683451911883902015-01-12T01:15:22.858-08:002015-01-12T01:15:22.858-08:00Gun free zone really is an interesting topic. Your...Gun free zone really is an interesting topic. Your examples like sandy hook shooting are attractive. Your speech is organized. Eyes contact and speaking speed are Good. Well done!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post-87096625560357652932015-01-11T23:12:02.317-08:002015-01-11T23:12:02.317-08:00I am surprised at so much sport players do perform...I am surprised at so much sport players do performance enhancing drugs.your speech is pervasive and organized. Your eye contact is really good. Your gesture distracted a little bit. Above all,Well done !Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post-14755841481655004312015-01-11T23:07:19.484-08:002015-01-11T23:07:19.484-08:00I agree with your idea that video games and violat...I agree with your idea that video games and violation have no relation. Because sometimes video games can relieve ones feeling on video games. As long as person control himself well, he will be fine. Your eye contact is solid and your speech is organized. Iike your diagram on the video screen. Well done!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post-18441933337766434642015-01-11T22:59:54.193-08:002015-01-11T22:59:54.193-08:00Your topic is interesting. I think your speech is ...Your topic is interesting. I think your speech is convincing because you used many persuasive examples and details. Your eye contact is solid and speaking speed is good. Well done!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post-20438846754079496372015-01-11T22:56:05.505-08:002015-01-11T22:56:05.505-08:00I like your starting of the speech because it was ...I like your starting of the speech because it was interesting. Bathrooms of our school really should to be improved as you said.your speech is organized and detailed. You are confident while you are speaking. Well done!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post-89245301229254303642015-01-11T22:51:39.653-08:002015-01-11T22:51:39.653-08:00Texting and driving has been a hot topic for many ...Texting and driving has been a hot topic for many years. Students are more likely to do so while they are driving. I agree with your point. Your eye contact and speaking speed are good. Well done!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post-38153333731876938602015-01-11T22:48:32.569-08:002015-01-11T22:48:32.569-08:00I agree that some prisoner rights do not make sens...I agree that some prisoner rights do not make sense. Your examples and evidence are convincing. If you are more familiar with your transcript and improve your eye contact would be better. Well done!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post-76167101334143922372015-01-11T22:44:15.195-08:002015-01-11T22:44:15.195-08:00Drug test is required for students! I agree your i...Drug test is required for students! I agree your idea. Your statistics data makes your point more convincing. Your eye contact and speaking speed is good. The speech is organized. Well done!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post-90907168016300045572014-12-28T10:53:31.912-08:002014-12-28T10:53:31.912-08:00https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qLqEgY7g3jg
I bel...https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qLqEgY7g3jg<br /><br />I believe my speech was persuasive enough to at least make people think about doing what I told them to do. I also believe my confidence was high on this speech, due to it being in the comfort of my own home and being able to redo the speech whenever I made a mistake. My eye contact was as good as can be in this video taped speech, and I also believe my gestures were not as good as others, mainly because I was video taping myself by holding a phone camera in front of my face, so I wasn't able to show my whole body.<br /><br />Alyssa: Your intro was very funny. You seemed to have a lot of confidence and you also seemed to enjoy convincing people to clean bathrooms<br /><br />Ethan: This speech was very informative, the facts you talked about were all positive causing this to be a good convincing speech towards exercise.<br /><br />Jordan: I believe your speech is one of my favorites. There is truth to what you said and I also believe that teachers need to see this speech in order to understand students.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post-56242722945458063132014-12-24T23:56:23.555-08:002014-12-24T23:56:23.555-08:00Although I was not really familiar with astronomy ...Although I was not really familiar with astronomy before, but I found that astronomy is interesting after I heard your speech with several interesting examples. Your eye contact is good although facial expression is a little strange. organization structure is clear. Well done!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post-85565009915840437762014-12-24T23:39:55.113-08:002014-12-24T23:39:55.113-08:00Your speech topic surprised me. It was interesting...Your speech topic surprised me. It was interesting. Peanut butter and jelly sandwiches was not my favorite choices , however, I decided to try more peanut butter and jelly sandwiches after I saw your speech. Well Done!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post-9227142915568906092014-12-24T23:31:39.210-08:002014-12-24T23:31:39.210-08:00Your topic is really controversy and interesting n...Your topic is really controversy and interesting nowadays. your arguments are clear enough to understand. Meanwhile, I realized that you took a lot of examples and statistics from some institution such as Forbs. It is persuasive. I like your eye contact and your speaking speed. Well Done!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post-87877538905607030462014-12-24T23:23:52.665-08:002014-12-24T23:23:52.665-08:00I believe you did a lot of research for the speech...I believe you did a lot of research for the speech. Your organization structure is clear.Your connection really attracts me. Your eye contact is well. However, you have some pauses, if you make more familiar with your manuscript, it would be better. Dressed nice, nice bow tie.Well Done!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post-71195854949563917492014-12-23T08:57:27.641-08:002014-12-23T08:57:27.641-08:00I agree with you 100%. Great topic, I have played ...I agree with you 100%. Great topic, I have played video games that have contained guns I think sense I was about 8. I have never felt like killing anyone before too. Great eye contact and also love the mic too.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11374333597649132270noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post-81530854794110485542014-12-23T08:40:04.933-08:002014-12-23T08:40:04.933-08:00This was a great topic, I learned a lot and sounds...This was a great topic, I learned a lot and sounds like studding abroad would be something cool to do. You have improved so much sense your first speech. Your English has become so much easier to understand and it almost sounds like a second language. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11374333597649132270noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post-20303143197054278052014-12-23T08:25:07.226-08:002014-12-23T08:25:07.226-08:00Great eye contact and pauses. You delivered this t...Great eye contact and pauses. You delivered this topic greatly and have given me more reasons not to use my phone while I drive. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11374333597649132270noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post-8176128493366912672014-12-21T08:37:26.115-08:002014-12-21T08:37:26.115-08:00Feist! I loved the Mic! I loved the graphics and y...Feist! I loved the Mic! I loved the graphics and you seemed very confident in what you were talking about. I agree with you. I dont think that just because there are violent video games crimes happen. I liked what you did. Right IdeaAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post-47693809295977604232014-12-21T08:32:27.109-08:002014-12-21T08:32:27.109-08:00Alyssa, I thought your speech was very unique and ...Alyssa, I thought your speech was very unique and creative. It was very well thought of and I really liked it. It was an interesting topic which made it interesting. I also liked how you tied some humor into it. It really made me laugh. Good job alyssa.<br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post-77051617164556712362014-12-17T08:08:11.722-08:002014-12-17T08:08:11.722-08:00it was good Jordan! Your voice is really good to l...it was good Jordan! Your voice is really good to listen to! It was a good topic, too. This thing happen to asian schools, a lot. It was an asian thing that everything student have been throughAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com