tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post9098854524250595021..comments2023-06-12T05:42:33.003-07:00Comments on Mrs. Dennert's Blog: Informative SpeechWriting Teacher78http://www.blogger.com/profile/00862586497331858541noreply@blogger.comBlogger78125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post-78689488743434155002015-11-30T09:40:25.971-08:002015-11-30T09:40:25.971-08:00I really liked this speech. I had known nothing ab...I really liked this speech. I had known nothing about what you were talking about before the speech but after it seemed like I knew a lot about the topic. Also, I thought that your topic was very interesting and you got everyone's attention. Overall, good speechAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post-66231999847396740102015-11-29T19:15:22.776-08:002015-11-29T19:15:22.776-08:00Nate: https://youtu.be/XKZXTjNZFrgNate: https://youtu.be/XKZXTjNZFrgAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post-63591761903712336322015-11-25T05:36:12.638-08:002015-11-25T05:36:12.638-08:00I thought that this was one of your better speeche...I thought that this was one of your better speeches. You chose a topic that you knew a lot about, and your topics seemed organized. You didn't seem nervous, and you were poised. Overall good speechAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05185774729555032208noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post-54315606828030088832015-11-24T22:47:52.225-08:002015-11-24T22:47:52.225-08:00Zack, although I have a pretty definitive view on ...Zack, although I have a pretty definitive view on extra-terrestrial life, you still made me second guess what I thought. You did a great job of capturing our attention and you also used your slides really well and you got our attention. Nice job on this one.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07091131661875718600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post-17011506527735296552015-11-24T22:45:24.678-08:002015-11-24T22:45:24.678-08:00Sam, although I really don't have a whole lot ...Sam, although I really don't have a whole lot of interest in fantasy football, you have made me want to try it next year, You gave us very interesting information about how it all got started and how it has evolved today. Well done with your power point and I hope you do just as well for your next speech.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07091131661875718600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post-84401949896746939492015-11-24T22:42:44.067-08:002015-11-24T22:42:44.067-08:00Maddie, your speech was both fun and informative. ...Maddie, your speech was both fun and informative. I think you made everyone feel a little safer for when we are in the water next. The format was a little unconventional but in the end you still had us begging for more "less likely than"'s. It was an overall really good speech that captivated us all. Great job.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07091131661875718600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post-9889731738939261822015-11-24T22:38:59.762-08:002015-11-24T22:38:59.762-08:00Alex, you looked much more comfortable up there co...Alex, you looked much more comfortable up there compared to the last times that you had speeches. You were really able to talk in depth about it because you have experience in that field. You taught us new things about cows that I personally did not know. You used your power point very well and you made great eye contact. By far one of your best speeches this year, well done.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07091131661875718600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post-82288270346305702142015-11-24T22:36:16.697-08:002015-11-24T22:36:16.697-08:00Dylan, you seemed much more comfortable up there t...Dylan, you seemed much more comfortable up there this time, you were talking about somehting you knew a lot about and your really showed that you knew a lot about golf. Although this may not have been the best of informative speeches, this would have been an absolutely amazing speech for you to have done for your 1 minute of fame speech on because you would have been able to double it with a demonstration along with why you personally like the speech so much. All in all though, well done.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07091131661875718600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post-56644086679113931052015-11-24T22:30:50.329-08:002015-11-24T22:30:50.329-08:00Sharon, although it was hard to understand you at ...Sharon, although it was hard to understand you at times, that is what makes your speeches so much more interesting. We actually have to think harder about what you are saying which in turn makes us think harder about your topic and what you are actually saying. I really liked your speech and I learned a lot of new things. Good job.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07091131661875718600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post-50187620376182410362015-11-24T22:29:11.069-08:002015-11-24T22:29:11.069-08:00I thought you did a pretty good job at presenting ...I thought you did a pretty good job at presenting your speech. You brought up new information that I don't think everyone knew about and you also gave possibilities about life on mars briefly. You made pretty good eye contact and you used your power point really well. Nice jobAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07091131661875718600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post-41712754859597277462015-11-24T22:27:10.920-08:002015-11-24T22:27:10.920-08:00Nate, I thought your presentation was pretty good,...Nate, I thought your presentation was pretty good, you made eye contact with everyone, you explained many facts about your topic and finally you made us all aware of haw dangerous of a sport it is to play. I liked everything about your speech. Only suggestion is that you should have worn the hat for the whole speech. hahaAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07091131661875718600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post-9706130548999740932015-11-24T22:16:10.221-08:002015-11-24T22:16:10.221-08:00Vincent, I liked the topic that you had for your s...Vincent, I liked the topic that you had for your speech. You had all of your information well thought out and you sounded very educated in your topic. The only thing that I would say wasn't amazing was your eye contact and your pace. You were looking down at your sheet most of the time and you were talking at about 100 words per minute, which in my opinion was pretty funny cause you sounded like a true alien nerd, although I was still able to understand it I think it might have been a little harder to understand the speech because of all the information that was being put out so quickly. Otherwise you did a great job and you made me question whether there might actually be life outside of our bubble we call earth.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07091131661875718600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post-80280388683326425542015-11-24T22:10:29.882-08:002015-11-24T22:10:29.882-08:00Krista, although I have only been to Disney World ...Krista, although I have only been to Disney World once in my life I remember it like it was yesterday. The facts that you introduced were interesting and probably usually overlooked. I thought you did a great job on your slideshow and your information for your topic was well organized and put together well. Also good eye contact for this speech, keep it up!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07091131661875718600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post-46022318833447191402015-11-24T22:07:18.467-08:002015-11-24T22:07:18.467-08:00Hailey, I thought your speech went really well. A ...Hailey, I thought your speech went really well. A few of your words got jumbled up but in the long run we were still able to understand you. You presented information that a lot of us probably did not know. You made a lot of eye contact and you stayed engaging with your words and your slides. Nice job.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07091131661875718600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post-1232548627755020832015-11-24T22:05:07.633-08:002015-11-24T22:05:07.633-08:00Tyler, I was not able to relate too well to your s...Tyler, I was not able to relate too well to your speech due to the fact that I rarely listen to country music. Although the information you gave about the topic was interesting and made me take a second look at the music, still not my favorite but not as bad as I remembered. You were really able to show the positives in that type of music. Well done overall.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07091131661875718600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post-37215777955284938822015-11-24T21:33:13.597-08:002015-11-24T21:33:13.597-08:00David, it is true, your speech did bring about a r...David, it is true, your speech did bring about a realization about how devastating someone making a bad decision could be. But you also gave us some amazing information about WMDs that I did not know about before. Your eye contact wasn't amazing but the content of your speech made up for it and then some. Well done, your speeches are always ones I look forward to listening to.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07091131661875718600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post-23062939397502142192015-11-24T21:09:38.086-08:002015-11-24T21:09:38.086-08:00I loved your speech Krista! I have been to Disney ...I loved your speech Krista! I have been to Disney more times than I can count and I never knew half of those facts that you gave. You seemed super informed on the topic and had great eye contact and poise.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16658135658114683750noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post-44081369143052680042015-11-24T21:08:15.486-08:002015-11-24T21:08:15.486-08:00Your speech was very interesting. Since I am a vic...Your speech was very interesting. Since I am a victim of not getting enough sleep every night it was cool to hear some of the facts that you gave. Your speech was extremely informative and you seemed confident up there, also your eye contact was really good.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16658135658114683750noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post-9914339748830822402015-11-24T20:38:45.824-08:002015-11-24T20:38:45.824-08:00You made me realize how important sleeping is. Thi...You made me realize how important sleeping is. This is a good speech. I will told other people about the information in your speech. It is very helpful. You also connected to the audience and have a very good eye contact.Good job.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post-22140857220206740102015-11-24T20:35:37.384-08:002015-11-24T20:35:37.384-08:00I like your speech very much. It made me to memori...I like your speech very much. It made me to memorize my childhood in the Disneyland. You introduced about Disney very well. All the information that you found was interesting. I also love this place, and you made the speech connected to myself.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post-78700500789171395842015-11-24T20:32:29.973-08:002015-11-24T20:32:29.973-08:00I think it is a very interesting topic.You looked ...I think it is a very interesting topic.You looked very calm and your pace was very good. I heard about the Bermuda triangle before, but your speech let me get to know it very well. Good job.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post-66837204206436090042015-11-24T20:26:23.421-08:002015-11-24T20:26:23.421-08:00I think your speech went very well. Your introduct...I think your speech went very well. Your introduction of the history of the country music was very interesting. I got to know about the culture of American country music. I think this speech taught me a lot. Because it is totally different than Chinese country music.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post-19390468171579705272015-11-24T19:36:03.351-08:002015-11-24T19:36:03.351-08:00I learned a lot from your speech! I had no idea th...I learned a lot from your speech! I had no idea that caffeine could be so bad for you. I could tell that you were confident about your topic. I also liked how you cited and referenced to your sources in your speech as you were speaking. Overall, nicely done!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00430945686005661083noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post-37646632556855204862015-11-24T19:32:55.893-08:002015-11-24T19:32:55.893-08:00I really liked your speech. I did not know much ab...I really liked your speech. I did not know much about the Bermuda triangle before this. I learned a lot of new things! Your poise and eye contact was great!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00430945686005661083noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post-34358511966608556782015-11-24T16:00:45.106-08:002015-11-24T16:00:45.106-08:00I thought your speech was awesome and I felt super...I thought your speech was awesome and I felt super connected to it because I love Disney. I was actually smiling almost the whole time because your slides and your description just reminded me of the feeling you get when you're at Disney World!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16810814504512679320noreply@blogger.com