tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post9155960426526543543..comments2023-06-12T05:42:33.003-07:00Comments on Mrs. Dennert's Blog: Something I TreasureWriting Teacher78http://www.blogger.com/profile/00862586497331858541noreply@blogger.comBlogger48125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post-31898147069919158302015-05-26T07:43:24.766-07:002015-05-26T07:43:24.766-07:00I thought you did better than you think. all it ne...I thought you did better than you think. all it need was a little practice like you said but it had good content Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post-80419095403999915442015-05-26T07:41:30.182-07:002015-05-26T07:41:30.182-07:00I thought my speech went well. I really enjoyed wr...I thought my speech went well. I really enjoyed writing this speech because it really is something of great importance to me. I was also well prepared for this speech. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post-6817821551528055712015-04-02T08:38:30.815-07:002015-04-02T08:38:30.815-07:00Danny Boy-
Your speech was pretty good bruh. I kno...Danny Boy-<br />Your speech was pretty good bruh. I know it was pretty tough for you to talk about what you talked about, but you made light of the situation, and delivered a pretty strong speech. It was kind of obvious that you didn't parctice, but other than that, your eye contact and pacing was pretty good.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02034973738480367357noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post-29831233754737544982015-04-02T08:36:39.921-07:002015-04-02T08:36:39.921-07:00I thought my speech went okay. It was kind of toug...I thought my speech went okay. It was kind of tough talking about that subject, because it's a very touchy subject for me. But in terms of the actual speech, it went okay. My eye contact was kind of poor due to the fact that it was a manuscript speech. My pace was pretty good. I felt like my posture and poise while I was speaking helped me remain confident while I was speaking. Overall, I think it went pretty good.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02034973738480367357noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post-90556326650023346262015-03-30T08:31:16.556-07:002015-03-30T08:31:16.556-07:00Steven said these words on this pink screen
Peter ...Steven said these words on this pink screen<br />Peter I think that this was one of your better speeches. It took a lot of courage to go up there and talk to the class about the stuff you said and as well as you did it. I thought your pace was pretty good for the most part, it was mostly the same. The way you spoke seemed natural and not forced and you had really good eye contact for this being a manuscript speech. I think that you needed some more pauses in this speech, other then that I think your speech flowed really well.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post-91887095461079868882015-03-30T08:19:15.692-07:002015-03-30T08:19:15.692-07:00Steven Kelly posts these words
Jon your speech was...Steven Kelly posts these words<br />Jon your speech was very powerful. You seemed to almost know the whole speech by heart, and a lot of practice I thought was put into your speech. I think that the only way you could of done it better was that if you were allowed more time to say your speech. Other than that your speech was very good.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post-61424986792699828452015-03-29T17:17:40.748-07:002015-03-29T17:17:40.748-07:00Jon all I have to say is wow, just wow. I respect ...Jon all I have to say is wow, just wow. I respect how much you shared with us, and all through your speech I didn't know whether to cry, or to stay silent in shock. It was a good speech though. I liked it a lot. My advice is to keep digging like that, because the deeper you dig the more you find your voice.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post-42967921978531421822015-03-29T17:17:25.385-07:002015-03-29T17:17:25.385-07:00Daniel, your speech was touching. It was really co...Daniel, your speech was touching. It was really cool what you shared with us, and even though you were ill prepared it was still a good speech. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post-84494472222043077772015-03-29T17:16:05.977-07:002015-03-29T17:16:05.977-07:00Daniel, your speech was touching. It was really co...Daniel, your speech was touching. It was really cool what you shared with us, and even though you were ill prepared it was still a good speech. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post-36473980199092956322015-03-29T17:13:26.652-07:002015-03-29T17:13:26.652-07:00Jon all I have to say is wow, just wow. I respect ...Jon all I have to say is wow, just wow. I respect how much you shared with us, and all through your speech I didn't know whether to cry, or to stay silent in shock. It was a good speech though. I liked it a lot. My advice is to keep digging like that, because the deeper you dig the more you find your voice.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post-89490932483602620942015-03-27T07:06:08.653-07:002015-03-27T07:06:08.653-07:00Hailey-
I liked your speech a lot because you pick...Hailey-<br />I liked your speech a lot because you picked something that has been with you for years, and through a lot of events and moments with you. Your speech was well organized, and it was easy to follow. Your pace was good overall too, and your a pretty confident speaker. I also like the watermelon color of the shoes, it was funny when you brought it up because you were so proud of the color. A lot of other people liked your speech too, good job. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post-63752693224489879312015-03-27T07:00:02.972-07:002015-03-27T07:00:02.972-07:00Honestly if you do not get a star up on her wall f...Honestly if you do not get a star up on her wall for your speech I will cry. When you were getting to the end of your speech I could not stop listening, you were getting faster, and redder, and running out of breath. I was in your place in your school, I was seeing everything you were describing and it was just intense. I could not believe how good of a speech you did, but I was kind of expecting something like that from you. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post-12132389816146031002015-03-27T06:56:50.322-07:002015-03-27T06:56:50.322-07:00I did not like my treasure speech because I did no...I did not like my treasure speech because I did not really practice it at all. I forgot about it until the morning it was due and I only had enough written down for about two minutes. After I finished it I read it over only once, and then I still had to get my visual aid. After I had everything ready I was one of the first people to go. I felt like I was all over the place when I was reading off my manuscript, and it sounded a lot better when I was typing it out. I wish I would have actually prepared myself for it more.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post-43922734596850355142015-03-25T15:31:17.826-07:002015-03-25T15:31:17.826-07:00Your speech was filled with emotion, which I reall...Your speech was filled with emotion, which I really enjoyed; also your speech was filled with detail, which I also enjoyed. I applaud you for talking about this serious and sad topic, but I am glad that you were able to talk to us about this topic.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06198523509304490949noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post-34237107576514763892015-03-25T15:26:44.812-07:002015-03-25T15:26:44.812-07:00I really enjoyed your speech; you can never have t...I really enjoyed your speech; you can never have too much detail. I felt that you had one of the better speeches overall, and also with your eye contact, as that was a problem with plenty of our classmates including myself.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06198523509304490949noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post-21782667340013457522015-03-25T15:24:14.552-07:002015-03-25T15:24:14.552-07:00Nice speech, You connected with the audience while...Nice speech, You connected with the audience while staying on topic. Do not be afraid to get emotional, all that shows us is that you have a heart, and maybe a brain. Overall I enjoyed your speech and what you had to say. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06198523509304490949noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post-63189803568845736252015-03-25T15:19:57.056-07:002015-03-25T15:19:57.056-07:00This speech was not enjoyable for me, ill tell you...This speech was not enjoyable for me, ill tell you why. First off it may seem all dandy that you will know what you will say, but for me, eye contact was not a strong point. I also felt I could not really connect with the audience when the speech was on something I treasured. I tried putting a different spin on the speech while trying to make it sound like a bedtime story with castles and such. For my “object” that I was suppose to bring in, I had in mind that my scar on my eyebrow would be enough, but I guess not. To my previous statement, it will be with me forever and with that it reminds me of my sister, and she was my main topic of this speech Overall, no more manuscripts and have a nice day. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06198523509304490949noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post-50624329287772575702015-03-24T18:18:53.109-07:002015-03-24T18:18:53.109-07:00Jon you did a really great job with your speech yo...Jon you did a really great job with your speech you had a fast pace but you warned us of that and it was something you really cared about and it seemed tough to talk about and im glad you shared that experience with us... great speechAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post-82428301993752740582015-03-24T18:15:59.969-07:002015-03-24T18:15:59.969-07:00I think you did a really good job and I really lik...I think you did a really good job and I really liked your speech mostly because of all the great memories and you were really confident, you had a fast pace but it wasnt that bad and i'm glad you treasure our last minute giftAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post-22461163920017665772015-03-24T18:13:38.034-07:002015-03-24T18:13:38.034-07:00I was not really prepared for my speech at all I b...I was not really prepared for my speech at all I basically forgot bout it and I also forgot to dress up I think my speech was ok though I said all that i wanted to say but i didn't read it off the manuscript because I really wasn't comfortable with that Overall I think I did alright and I would just practice more if I could redo it.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post-66840180903384688392015-03-24T07:49:31.456-07:002015-03-24T07:49:31.456-07:00I R steven Kelly
This speech was the most difficul...I R steven Kelly<br />This speech was the most difficult for me to write. I had to practice a bunch in order for me to get through the speech. I think that I did well with this speech. Eye contact was good even with it being a manuscript, I was also able to keep a good pace and volume during the whole thing as well. I need to work on hand gestures, even when they were written into the speech I still kept forgetting about them.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post-1087750457858564692015-03-24T06:27:03.150-07:002015-03-24T06:27:03.150-07:00YouTube Video: http://youtu.be/Y5GzbACLAq4YouTube Video: http://youtu.be/Y5GzbACLAq4Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post-49871832732491037662015-03-23T21:56:18.780-07:002015-03-23T21:56:18.780-07:00Aaron, although you ran out of time at the end of ...Aaron, although you ran out of time at the end of class your speech was still quite enjoyable and unique. I felt it easy to connect with your speech. you seemed a little nervous up there but will improved over previous speeches.it was clear you spent a lot of time practicing. overall great jobAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11712737429080709153noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post-18025729183859004502015-03-23T21:55:49.736-07:002015-03-23T21:55:49.736-07:00Aaron, although you ran out of time at the end of ...Aaron, although you ran out of time at the end of class your speech was still quite enjoyable and unique. I felt it easy to connect with your speech. you seemed a little nervous up there but will improved over previous speeches.it was clear you spent a lot of time practicing. overall great jobAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11712737429080709153noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8766181031976447003.post-876465292675692072015-03-23T21:51:35.490-07:002015-03-23T21:51:35.490-07:00Matt, I have yet to see you struggle with a speech...Matt, I have yet to see you struggle with a speech. You may have been nervous, but it was hardly evident. your speech was well rounded and unique. you had great I eye contact and a steady pace. Your conclusion was also well improved upon compared to previous speeches. Great job.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11712737429080709153noreply@blogger.com